Interested In Feedback On Some Writings
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Interested In Feedback On Some Writings
Hey guys, I enjoy writing, whether it's short stories, or a novel-type thing I've been working on for a while. The trouble is, nothing happens with them. I write them and then they sit in a pile. Would anyone be interested in reading some of my stuff and maybe giving some feedback?
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yes and no thunder taken...
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I guess I'll start with a little short story I wrote. I realize it's completely unrealistic and not how things work, but suspend your disbelief for the sake of the story. This was a rainy Saturday afternoon's 3 hours here, gimme a break haha
I guess I'll start with a little short story I wrote. I realize it's completely unrealistic and not how things work, but suspend your disbelief for the sake of the story. This was a rainy Saturday afternoon's 3 hours here, gimme a break haha
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well, I for one enjoyed the story and its telling. Sad about the end, perhaps, and hoping that doesn't happen for real any time too soon...
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Yeah I guess it's not the happiest of endings...But thanks for reading!
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Interesting flow. I'm going to have to print it out and re-read it before I can add a better comment here, but still good.
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